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Re: Untitled part 1
Hey! Well, I agree with those that who have posted before me… but, I’ll try to be as helpful as possible with this review. This story is confusing and seems ...
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: sacuna's gift part 2
Well, this was interesting, but confusing at the same time... It's a good start, but it has some errors in it that they distracted me from being able to read ...
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: -The Outsiders- and -That was then, This is now-
I was wondering when someone was going to start a topic about this book... I read this book when I was in eighth grade, wow that was awhile ago... I ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Rushing Water
Well, that was an interesting start... though it was kind of short for a first chapter I liked the action between Ellie and her mother. it was funny and didn't ...
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: Followers of the Light - Chapter One
I really liked this... this had just enough mystery to it that I hung on to every word... I agree with Adam though, the flow from the two on the ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
This was a pretty good start, I like it for the most part. I do think that the dialogue seemed kind of forced as well as unrealistic... I really don't ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: Phone call
This was interesting... really kind of creepy... I liked the fact that you used only dialogue, though once the second male came in, it was hard to tell who was ...
Oct 22, 2007
